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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-02-14 07:17 PM


I think of you when I feel low
it makes me smile
just the thought of you comforts my tortured soul
I think of you and the way you smile at me
and it makes me think of better days.
I look into your soul and I already know what I will find
that of a pure heart that wish’s to love and give.
Some times when I feel bad I wish I could hold you
because only then could I escape reality.
What does my soul need to keep from turning cold??
I guess just love. I do not speak of sex or material abjects
that is not what I want.
I just want to be loved....


 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


© Copyright 2000 James Dean - All Rights Reserved
Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
1 posted 2000-02-15 12:26 PM


Love you're poem.  You responded to mine (Cupid's Arrow) and just to let you know...I'm a girl.  I wrote it about my boyfriend because we have been going out for 2 months and a really like him.
poetic_butterfly
Junior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 25
illinois, usa
2 posted 2000-02-15 12:32 PM


well, since you replied to mine, i decided i'd reply to yours. very nice expression of love. i rarely write "true" love poems, and when i do they are so symbolically represented that it's hard to figure them out. but you managed to express the feeling very well. keep up the awesome writing.  

 ....the words that stand still are often the ones that move us most....

Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
3 posted 2000-02-15 12:32 PM


Have an e-mail adress? My name is Nicole
nicolec@family.net

Nikkisweet
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
4 posted 2000-02-15 12:37 PM


Are you going to answer me?
Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
5 posted 2000-02-15 12:43 PM


Yes I have a email adress if you looked at my a acount it would tell but your new here so thats ok my email adress is dheidebrecht@dccnet.com

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
6 posted 2000-02-15 12:54 PM


thanx for replying to my poems dean ur o.k. I loved this poem it was really good...here's my e-mail addy so u can drop me a line sometime...angel_n_despair@excite.com

 To be or not to be...that is the question.

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

7 posted 2000-02-15 03:48 PM


Great poem dean....i think we all feel that way at times. Keep smilin'  

Salma

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