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On This Valentines Day |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
On This Valentines Day On this valentines day I take the time to show you, how much I love you. On this valentines day I take the time to show you, there’s no one above you. On this valentines day I remember, all you have done for me. On this valentines day I remember, when I was blind you made me see. So when I’m asked who will I give, my unconditional love to, there’s only one answer, and that’s you!!! “You were my heart when my heart ceased to beat scarred of agony, pain and defeat.” "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sweet and beautiful! *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Deano is BACK! No better time to arive! This was great. I hope you give it to that special someone on Monday! Good job. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I LOVE this poem! I'm a sucker for romance, and I really like how you wrote this! I especally like the last quotation!  ~LoveBug "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
This was just amazing. I think my favorite line is "when I was blind you made me see" like she just woke you up. Brilliant. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Wow, Dean, when you come back, you come back strong... Keep up the good work, and if you wrote that for a special someone, I hope you give it to her, and that it has the effect it was supposed to have... ~Kristi Lynn  "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
HE'S BACK AND READY TO ATTACK!!!!! and man did he ever capture my heart with this poem I just came back from passing out it hit me so hard anyway great poem To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Ah! How sweet. This was really nice Dean. Great poem! Salma |
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