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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Who is this person I see? Please tell me who can she be? The girl I see with long, disheveled hair, who looks like she just awoke from a nightmare. The girl with sad, hollow eyes, that looked like they've seen many cries. The girl with the lonely looking face, and feels like she doesn't belong anyplace. Please tell me who can she be? I'm hoping, praying, that she isn't still me... ~Kristi Lynn (I know, I know, it's still depressing, but I can't help it!)  "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Are you in a depressed mood today? oh well...this is a great poem.....i know that feeling that it describes---keep up the good work. -Ender |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
angel: i know, i'm a depressing person as it is, but i like it  i especially like the last line and the way you tie it in with the rest of the poem... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahhh... I think its ok. Everyone goes through a hard depressing time. In your case, you have the given right to be depressed. I just wanted to let you know I think about you everyday and I hope things will improve with time. They always do. My words of wisdom for today: "You can't win if you haven't lost, therefor you can't laugh if you haven't cried!" "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I'm not too good on the reply thing, but this poem is very good. This is a feeling I know too well, but in time all things will get better. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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