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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-02-11 12:42 PM


Christopher
pOetry_kills
Marilyn
isIs
mistikmaN
rainbow_Girl

Tamma
rOn
toeraG
jEr
sweeTcollege_girl
lyricfetisH
dreamEvil
dsnydeR

elIzabeth santos
poetdeviNe

Astrea

majestiC
serenIty
localRebel
luCie
justbLeu
angEl6917

lOvebug
skyFyre

Pepper
sOleil
marieE66
liTtle_spyro
duSk treader

rex Allen mccoy
lynN wood
ballaDeer

Bojopy
u_genE
eCho rayne
tara simMs
alIcat
scorched dragoN
sammyGirl

0o0ostephAnio0o0

Chic
kItty
temptRess
laCy j
wayoutwaLt
jytreE

meadOwmuse
rosalind palaFox

january Flowers
hoot_owl_Rn
mIke
g.a.wEbb
marge tiNdal
whtDove
Sea


capital letters make up the poem..I hope you can read this!  

stay cool  

~~SCG~~

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-11-2000).]

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Tamma
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1 posted 2000-02-11 02:37 PM


SCG this was really cute and very confusing LoL

~~~Tamma~~~

 *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?* -pom16pom-



hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271

2 posted 2000-02-11 03:04 PM


very nice, i do like a poem that takes some thinking, very nicely done

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LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-02-11 03:41 PM


Hey no fair, we aren't supposed to have to think outside of school!   Very cute little puzzle you have here. I found it interesting(after unscrambling it) Good job.
poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
4 posted 2000-02-11 05:16 PM


scg: took a while (the i's were the hardest) but i got it.. very nice work ;o)

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge



angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
5 posted 2000-02-11 05:49 PM


I liked, but I agree with jerome that the I's were hard to read.  It's cute, and something to make me think is what I need right now, to get my mind off of everything else.  
~Kristi Lynn


 "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
6 posted 2000-02-11 09:18 PM


Hahahaa... That was clever. You get an award in my book for most original! I thought I was a spy decoding a secret message! LOL

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
7 posted 2000-02-11 09:23 PM


was it really that hard to read guys? lol

I told you how to read it, it couldn't have been that hard!  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~



 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


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