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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I’m taken, You know. But every now and then, I catch you looking my way. Wondering just what they see, When they look into my eyes. A proven rarity, Only they know. Occasionally our eyes meet, But I continue on with Andrew. You see the smile beginning to form, Perhaps it is because of my boyfriend. The teacher goes on, But I'm not listening. Andrew, he one that keeps me sane, In the middle of this madness. Even though hes so far away, Just thinking of him keeps me calm. Seemingly pissed, Yet, a smile forms. Its so hard believe he’s so far away, And effects my life so greatly. He brought me outta my shell, And I fell in love with him instantly. He’s always been there. Helping with my pain. A lot of things my surprise you this year, Tears falling from my eyes may be one of them. *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?* -pom16pom- |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
This is a wondeful poem. everything is very well stated. you should keep writing poetry like this---it is very good and smooth. keep up the great work. -Ender |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job. I know what your talking about. I do however like looking into people's eyes. It gives me the feeling as if I know what their thinking. Good job, I aplaud you on another great work! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice! Glad you have Andrew! We all need someone to help us keep focus. Don't worry about others. They have their own problems and will try to compound yours. I've read several of your poems and I like your work. Keep writing! Danny |
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