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Fallen Angels |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
(i decided on a title) I've seen the things that live in the night lurking about in abysmal Shadows crimson eyes, that radiate ravenous delight with each deadly, stealthy step -shying away from the sanctified Light waiting for some prey, -an innocent- to fall into their depraved clutches dragging it to those icy Shadows devouring body, spirit, and soul, wallowing in the lust and glory of the blood and the screams and the cries -an orgy of guiltless pleasure- and when there's nothing left to condenm they move on, -only leaving fuel for the eternal Fire- taking their unquenchable hunger, still lurking in those deslolate Shadows. [This message has been edited by rich-pa (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
I didn't want this to die out without any response. Your use of descriptive words is great. How about "Silent Predator" for a title? "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
rich-pa: kinda creepy, but still a solid poem... i dig it..  keep up the good work man... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
changed it up a bit, whadda ya think now jerome? |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
As i have said bewfore, i love poems that involve angels. i especially like this one. keep up the good work. -Ender |
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