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My Angel From Above
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My Angel From Above |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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To dream a lovers dream To hold a lovers hand To kiss a lovers lips United we both stand Beyond the naked eye Dreams all so true The eternal flame of hope I didn't have a clue Whispers of the soul A sonnet to a rose Summers final bliss From where the flower grows Unspoken Emmotions Of luminous things Treasured innosence To my heart she brings Silent Whispers A gentle heart Passions Shadow Came from the start You are my dreams My unfilled love Come back to me please My angel from above [This message has been edited by trevorskogsbergh (edited 02-11-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
trevor: I loved your poem. Something so heartfelt and sweet just sorta gets you right in the heart, ya know? Oh, sorry, I'm kinda getting mushy here...  Anyhoo, I look forward to reading more of your great poems.~Kristi Lynn  "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
<sniff-sniff> This is so sweet.....you're making me blush! Ahem, well, I think you are a very talented person, and I very much hope you can find your "angel" again. Beautiful. |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
I love this poem....it is great....i dont know why, but i love poems that involve angels....i am not religous or anything...i guess that my belief in angels has kept my chin up in the toughest of moments....keep up the great work... -Ender |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
trevor: this a very lovely expression of romance... there are a few verses that read a little awkwardly, but other than that i think this is lovely  sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Man.... with this poem, you should be able to get any "angel" you want! Good job. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
How sweet!! That was really great. Salma |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
Actually I'd like it if you (poetry_kills) could help me out a little with this poem. You said it sounds a little awkward so if you could please help me, that would be great. Trevor |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sweet, beautiful work. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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