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Teen Poetry #2

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Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-02-16 10:47 PM

This is for you
To whom I gave my all

This is for you
Who'd rise at my fall

This is for you
Who'd make me cry

This is for you
It's called a good-bye.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-02-17 02:48 PM

Smore..that was...wow...short, but very powerful...is this to who you e-mailed me about???

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

2 posted 2000-02-17 03:03 PM

This made me cry. How sad. Good poem though.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

3 posted 2000-02-17 07:55 PM

smore: this poem actually has a very profound meaning for me... i wrote a similar poem for a dear friend of mine (though mine was longer and structured much differently) after we parted ways... it was called "the final farewell" and i doubt anyone will ever read it... i just wanted to let you know what your poem brought up in my mind...

sincerely,
jerome the melancholy priest

Disarm you with a smile
And leave you like they left me here
To wither in denial
The bitterness of one who's left alone
--[billy corgan]--

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

4 posted 2000-02-17 08:38 PM

Thanks you guys, this is for who I once thought was the love of my life. Most of what I have written is about or for him. Though it's sad what happen to me, hes been quite an insperation.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-02-17 11:05 PM

Wow....short yet so powerful in meaning! Great job!

Salma

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