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Smore
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-02-16 10:47 PM



This is for you
To whom I gave my all

This is for you
Who'd rise at my fall

This is for you
Who'd make me cry

This is for you
It's called a good-bye.


 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

© Copyright 2000 Smore - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-02-17 02:48 PM


Smore..that was...wow...short, but very powerful...is this to who you e-mailed me about???

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
2 posted 2000-02-17 03:03 PM


This made me cry.  How sad.  Good poem though.

poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
3 posted 2000-02-17 07:55 PM


smore: this poem actually has a very profound meaning for me... i wrote a similar poem for a dear friend of mine (though mine was longer and structured much differently) after we parted ways... it was called "the final farewell" and i doubt anyone will ever read it... i just wanted to let you know what your poem brought up in my mind...

sincerely,
jerome the melancholy priest

 Disarm you with a smile
And leave you like they left me here
To wither in denial
The bitterness of one who's left alone
--[billy corgan]--

Smore
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso
4 posted 2000-02-17 08:38 PM


Thanks you guys, this is for who I once thought was the love of my life. Most of what I have written is about or for him. Though it's sad what happen to me, hes been quite an insperation.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love ~Smore

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

5 posted 2000-02-17 11:05 PM


Wow....short yet so powerful in meaning! Great job!

Salma

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