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The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 2000-02-07 04:26 PM


some body kill me please???
Im on my knees,prety pretty please
Kill me,i want to die
put a bullet in my Eyes,just kill me


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Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-02-07 04:30 PM


Sorry you feel that way. But don't do anything you'll regret or you won't even live to regret. You tend to live through those things.

Salma

The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
2 posted 2000-02-07 04:33 PM


its an adam sandler song,i jus fgelt like that now
Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

3 posted 2000-02-07 04:41 PM


I can identify with this poem, I feel that way every other day, I just hope that you aren't completely serious about following through!

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all.

The Mike Sacks
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since 1999-08-29
Posts 129
brooklyn ny
4 posted 2000-02-07 04:44 PM


im not

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
5 posted 2000-02-07 06:47 PM


This was pleasent! lol.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
6 posted 2000-02-07 07:24 PM


mike: um...   yeah... the form is good, but the subject is a little gruesome... i can see adam sandler doing this though... keep an eye out for crazy spoon-head man *waa haa haa*

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge



Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
7 posted 2000-02-08 02:45 PM


Well now that you have me singing the song LoL and I know you arent goign to follow through with this I am fine LoL.  But (IMHO) if you felt like this you should have written something yourself, and posted that instead!  I know there are a lot of songs out there to describe our own feelings, but they arent ours.  Just my opinion.  I am sorry you felt/and or feel like this, and if you need to talk, I am here!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2000-02-09 05:18 PM


hmmm I guess I forgot to mention this forum is for original works. Anything that is not yours can not be submitted here without proper notification. We must give credit where credit is due. Generally we frown on posting anything that is not original but some members in open have (but have posted that the author was unknown or who the author was). I hope this does not happen again. If it does I am afraid we will have to delete.
LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
9 posted 2000-02-09 09:26 PM


Hey now, when I read this I was about to tell you that I have the Wedding Singer soundtrack and that I knew Adam Sandler sings it. So, I guess I'm thinking if you were feeling like crap maybe you should have composed your own little poem about despair that was inspired by his song. Just a thought. But since you did give the author credit, no harm done i guess. NEVER do it again though.....(joking) Anyways, hope to read more from you in the future  
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