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since 2000-01-17
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-02-06 10:55 AM

Outside, the snow is falling softly,
Inside, I'm going nuts.

Cabin fever is kicking in,
Going off on everyone.

Not today,
Not with my mood,

The snow engulfs me,
Leaving me unable to break away.

I can't help but miss him,
For he keeps me sane.

I know, I'm stuck being
"Daddy’s little girl.”

Theres not much I can do,
I'm young, and hes my daddy.

I want to go outside and play in the snow,
But many other things have to be done.

I’d like to be able to do anything,
Maybe even go to school.

Come on snow, melt,
Yes!  Theres school tomorrow!

 *how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*

© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-08 06:27 PM

Yes, yet another post which got 0 replies in 2 days, so I am rescuing it from oblivion so maybe people will read it this time and respond  

Nice poem Tamma, sometimes it is better to go to school than be home alone when there is someone you miss  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
2 posted 2000-02-08 10:10 PM

nicely written...good read..thanks..

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~

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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

3 posted 2000-02-09 05:19 AM

Being Daddy's girl will be a treasured gift one day.  Trust me.  Best wishes on the snow  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-02-09 06:53 PM

What's snow? LOL Just in the desert, I don't see it..though I do remember it...hard sometimes to be stuck 'in' when you want to go out... good poem.  

Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-02-09 09:33 PM

Hey this was good. I can relate to poet devine cause I live in southeast Texas and i've never seen snow. Lots of RAIN though!  
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