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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
About a month ago, I wrote a poem called "BORED" during biology..Dusk Treader gave the suggestion of entitling one "Ode to Mitosis" So, if ya'll see him around, tell him to look at this one!  Oh Mitosis! How wonderful it would be! To actually see you happen And you for me to see! You work really hard With all your scientific plots For lives to go on living And all you are is dots Cells and membranes Know your job by heart They sit patiently waiting For you your job to start Oh Mitosis! My life depends on you! For if you were to quit working The cells would quit too! Here ya go DT, hope you like it!  [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Someone get a hold of Dusk Treader...I have his poem ready for him ~~Lavada~~ |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
cute girl very cute |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
bumping it up...FIND DUSK TREADER!!  |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
cute, think that's the only decent way i've ever heard anyone talk about mitosis that didn't involve me losing conscienceness. quiet amusing. NEW POETRY FORUM NOW OPEN "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. NEW POETRY FORUM ADDED Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Very inventive SCG! (Pssst! Don't worry, I'm sending Abe this way!) [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Interesting! I knew it could be done but, I never thought it would. Good job SCG. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
scg: i like this one a lot... dusk did us all a favor in challenging you to write it  *hehe* this poem reminds me of part of a poem i wrote a few years ago... mine was satiric more so than comedic and it doesn't make a whole lot of sense without the rest of the poem, but i thought you might be interested in seeing it... it's about how our society views science as a religion...Chorus to "Hymn to the Angels of Dust": O Sacred Science Oh Blessed Biology! How great thou art! With thy chorus of hold heartbeats breathing groaning singing! Save us with thy eucharist of flesh bone blood! Oh Holy Physics! Have mercy on us! Saint Newton give us peace – give us wisdom in the form of objectivity, Almighty Einstein – open our eyes to the truths of blind acceptance, Oh Sanctified Chemistry! In all your majesty! The sacred altar of test-tube racks and acid/ base mixtures, holy poisons – a new Creator – invention and discovery are the greatest goods! Oh Divine Technology! Sweet, graceful Machine! Singing the strange sweet psalm of automation and churning metal, we bow to thee, oh Most High! Keep us safely in your iron palm, may we always be one with thy cold-steel-oiled heart! Amen and Amen! sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, great! I talk to Dusk all the time and we're great friends, so I'll send him over here! *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
LOL,  I never knew my challenge would be taken seriously! What a great poem, thank you for sharing it with me! Hehe, Oh Sanctified Chemistry! In all your majesty! The sacred altar of test-tube racks and acid/ base mixtures, holy poisons – a new Creator – invention and discovery are the greatest goods! Amen Jerome! Thanks for sharing again Lavada (Spell that right?) Excellent! In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
LOL,thanks for looking at it DT..I'm the type of girl that takes challenges so be careful next time...i might take your next one too Thanks for sending him this way Alwye and Jerome! ~~Lavada |
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