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In response to marilyns poem (The Park)
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I was sitting in my classroom Waiting for class to end Ms. Martin was talking about variables When four strangers walked in Two girls and two boys All dressed in black They made their apologies And sat in the back After class was over One of the girls named Alwye Tripped on a chair and said "How clumsy of me!" One of the boys cleared his throat And I looked over there He was straightening his tie And said his name was Jer Then the other girl Ran out into the hall Yelling "my name is Marilyn" and ran into a wall While writing on the board About the strength of human wills The other boy was introduced His name was poetry_kills And all this time Ms. Martin was staring With her eyes open wide She asked me if I knew them I just wanted to hide I was so embarrassed Afraid I'd stutter I ran from the room slamming the door Before another word she could utter Now this poem may be foolish Silly, and have no plot But hey with these moderators It's the best I've got!  Sorry guys...I was bored  ~~Lavada~~<!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to here it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin </font> [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! that was sooooo funny. My favorite part was the one about Marilyn  it's hilarious and very witty i was practically ROTFLMAO the whole time while reading. Good work sis :> |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
scg: actually i see myself being the one to run into the wall *heh* (i certainly wouldn't be straightening a tie)... good job though humorous and you keep the rhyme scheme tight within the poem... i like that sincerely, jerome the boy with the japanese-speaking television A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha... this was the best one yet! I never can get those dang ties on right! Well, I thank you for your thoughtfulness and humor. It has served its purpose well. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Still waiting to see MArilyn's and Alwye's reaction...Come on girls...read it! ~~Lavada "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to here it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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