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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-02-03 11:30 PM

This is a humourous poem and nothing in it reflects reality in the least. I wrote this so we all could have a laugh. I wrote a similar one about poets in open. I hope you enjoy and take it as it was written, in jest.

I was walking in the park on day,
When much to my surprise.
Out jumped a bunch of lunatics,
Each one was in disguise.

Each one had on a name tag,
and much to my chagrin.
I knew every simgle name,
That was entered in.

shock_gospel was on a soapbox,
Doing a little jig.
While encounter was on the ground,
Acting like a pig.

sweet college_girl was looking,
Up to outer space.
chic was dancing manbo,
And was picking up the pace.

poetry_kills was swinging from a tree,
Banana in his mouth.
Alwye was on a higher branch,
Trying to fly south.

Master sauntered up to me,
And looked me in the eye.
Told me he was superman,
And he would never die.

Jer was in the sandbox,
Stirring up mud pies.
Love Bug was happly eating,
Thinking they were french fries.

Mistikman was swimming,
In amoungst the grass.
Angel was right with him,
Fishing for some bass.

Dusk Treader was a singing,
A top a litter can.
Kevin was a moaning,
Won't you be my man?

Dean was blowing bubbles,
And jumping with pure glee.
Astrea was jumping double dutch,
But jumping on her knees.

Mike Sacks was on the monkey bars,
Yodeling into space.
While Tamma and Star Fairy,
Where in a three legged race.
(Just the two of them!?)

In the midst of this confusion,
i was totally aghast.
There was another me,
Playing with a piece of glass.

I looked around in wonder,
My eyes near out my head.
I turned around, got out of there,
Went home and back to bed.

© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
1 posted 2000-02-03 11:43 PM

lol.....  Hey Superman...  You want a mud pie!
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
2 posted 2000-02-04 12:04 PM

  Anyone wanna' play double dutch with me?     I love it, Marilyn!  It's so cute!  Thank you!


 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Dusk Treader
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN
3 posted 2000-02-04 12:12 PM

Hehe, so cool Marilyn!  Thanks for including my crazy self in your poem!    I'm sorry about my singing skills, a little lacking.. but give me a garbage can in the middle of a park with bright blue skies above and how can I resist?  

Great idea!  Thanks for a smile!  

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons

Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
4 posted 2000-02-04 02:29 AM

swimming among the grass? bye god, what are you implying?   Excellent poem Marilyn  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
5 posted 2000-02-04 11:07 AM

Gee..I wonder if there are aliens up there?   thanks for including me marilyn, it was cute
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
6 posted 2000-02-04 02:46 PM

Anyone who wanna mambo? How about chacha?
Thanx Marilyn i never knew i could dance.
Thanx for includin me

Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
7 posted 2000-02-04 04:45 PM

marilyn: well... i can't speak for anyone else, but you got myself and "encounter" just right... (cept he acts more like a cat)... thanks for the note of humor in the midst of the chaos of life...

sincerely appreciative,
jerome the boy with no brain

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!

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since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
8 posted 2000-02-04 09:41 PM

HEY EVERYBODY!!!! It's me over here in the grass, my boat tipped over and my invisble life jacket disappeared! But check it out I got a six foot bass! Ready for dinner, anyone like sushi! I love it Marilyn, you got us just right  . Thanks for including me  .


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