|Teen Poetry #2|
|Touched By The Thought Of You|
since 2000-01-27Posts 271
As I look out upon the sun setting cast over the water
I feel a cool breeze rush across my skin,
As I stare at the reflection of nature in the dark lake
A thought comes to me, it sends chills down my body
It is so warm and comforting yet so distant
A soft voice and an innocent laugh plays aloud in my head
The thought intensifies, so confusing and scarry yet so clear and soothing,
Images flash, sounds play, thoughts collide inside my head
It feels as a dream running wild in the night
But in time the realization comes-----
It is was the thought of you.
"If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity."
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since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
Beautiful job, I can relate well to the feeling. Nice imagery indeed!
One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
since 1999-12-03Posts 872
just about where I want to be
since 1999-12-02Posts 443
Great job! This was an excellent use of imagery.
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