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Touched By The Thought Of You
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Touched By The Thought Of You |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
The Thought As I look out upon the sun setting cast over the water I feel a cool breeze rush across my skin, As I stare at the reflection of nature in the dark lake A thought comes to me, it sends chills down my body It is so warm and comforting yet so distant A soft voice and an innocent laugh plays aloud in my head The thought intensifies, so confusing and scarry yet so clear and soothing, Images flash, sounds play, thoughts collide inside my head It feels as a dream running wild in the night But in time the realization comes----- It is was the thought of you. Written by:Hoppy "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. NEW POETRY FORUM ADDED Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful job, I can relate well to the feeling. Nice imagery indeed!  *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Ditto Alwye |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job! This was an excellent use of imagery. |
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