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Teen Poetry #2

Sucking it in...

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-03 11:07 PM

suck in the hate
suck in the pain
suck everything that you crave
suck up your superficial underlying fear
suck up that feeling
suck up that reason
suck it up entirely
till it gives you some reason for living..

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2000-02-03 11:11 PM

Exellent job, although I disagree with you on the concept..letting it out is much healthier, while keeping it inside can kill you emotionally and mentally. Good job, do keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-02-05 01:12 PM

I agree with Alwye though. If your gonna suck in all that, be sure to let it out also. In all, great job it shows alot of feelings.

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

3 posted 2000-02-05 01:39 PM

Great work jackal !!! but i think it's better to let your bottled up feelings out sometimes in one way or another before it blows in your face.....

hope to see more of your work

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