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Teen Poetry #2

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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-16 04:39 PM

I know I'm small,
Does that mean I deserve this?

You’re twice my size,
You know I don’t fight.

You’re always nice,
When you want something.

I tried to walk away,
But you continued.

I tried to be the bigger person,
And I do believe I was.

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

1 posted 2000-03-16 07:36 PM

ah, very nice poem. Vauge can be very nice sometimes, it still conveys all the emotion, with a hint at more.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

perpetual_vertigo8
New Member

since 2000-03-16

Posts 3

2 posted 2000-03-16 08:23 PM

" Simplicity is the most difficult thing to secure in this world;it is the last limit of experience and the last effort of genius...."
You proved it, bravisimo!

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-03-16 11:07 PM

Well done Tamma. Thankyou for your e-mail earlier today. I have to confess, I checked a couple of e-mails before I sent you my reply.

lol.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

4 posted 2000-03-17 10:45 AM

Your poetry is showing a strength and confidence in yourself. That's nice to see.
Good writing.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2000-03-18 09:58 AM

Thank you all for commenting

Marilyn, i didnt mean to keep ya on yur toes like that

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

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