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Teen Poetry #2

Key to my heart

Minnie
Junior Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 14

0 posted 2000-02-03 01:49 PM

I closed the door to my heart
and nobody could come in
I trusted and loved only to hurt
That could never happen again now
I locked that door and tossed out the key,
Love could never enter again
Then you came into my life...
Then I just had to change my mind
But that key would be impossible to find
You held our your hand
Inside your palm was a key
The key to my heart
You always had it with you.
Now I know we were ment to be.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

1 posted 2000-02-04 09:10 PM

minnie: this is very sweet...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-02-05 01:25 PM

Are you sure he just didn't copy that key when you weren’t looking? Sorry.... I feel very comical today!

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

3 posted 2000-02-09 05:36 AM

Nicely written. And that key can be found in his love....forged and heated. I wish you the best.

There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

jascanvey
Member

since 1999-12-26

Posts 130
England

4 posted 2000-02-09 02:16 PM

AW, this is very sweet. I wish you luck and hope it works out for you - you deserve it.

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