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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-02-02 09:17 AM


You all know that I broke up with the guy I'm back together with now...this is what I was thinking after I broke it off

Did I do the right thing
By calling it off?
Did I break his heart?
Or does he even care?

I feel as if I should
Talk it over with him
Before I make a choice
And lose him forever

But my mind is saying
He never really cared
You were the foundation
But one person can't do it alone

So did I do the right thing?
Have I made him understand?
Can I handle being apart?
I just wish I knew...


 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
1 posted 2000-02-02 03:39 PM


I tell you care very much for this guy.  I'm so glad you two got back to gether.  I stand 100% on your decision.  You did the RIGHT THING!
jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
2 posted 2000-02-02 03:40 PM


hey don't ever question if you did the right thing because inside you know the anwser already and trust that feeling ok love ya sis

 

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-02-02 03:54 PM


thanks you two! i'm glad we are back together also!   thanks for supporting me Jer

jytree:  thanks to you too..you are a cool friend..i'm glad i met you    

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

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