|Teen Poetry #2
since 2000-01-25Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa
Words can't explress the way I feel
I'm lost in my mind
Withought a map or destination
New to me like grass on tree's
I'm not saying how it's gonna be
I don't know anything
I'm lost in me
Stuck on she
Can't find a way or how to be..
I'm talkin about a girl
That don't feel the same about me...
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since 2000-01-14Posts 478
I can totally relate to this poem with a guy I like. Keep up the good work, putting you're feelings into words, and I'll keep reading you're poetry.
"Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh
The Haunted Poet
since 2000-01-24Posts 37
Amen brother! I can relate to this poem all too well.... I like this poem greatly! Keep up the good work and I'll be back for more!
since 1999-12-02Posts 443
How true. I have been in that same situation more then once! Good job.
since 2000-01-27Posts 271
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