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ryun
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

0 posted 2000-02-01 05:27 AM


Words can't explress the way I feel
I'm lost in my mind
Withought a map or destination
New to me like grass on tree's
I'm not saying how it's gonna be
I don't know anything
I'm lost in me
Stuck on she
Can't find a way or how to be..
I'm talkin about a girl
That don't feel the same about me...

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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-02-01 09:29 AM


I can totally relate to this poem with a guy I like.  Keep up the good work, putting you're feelings into words, and I'll keep reading you're poetry.

 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

The Haunted Poet
Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37
Sumner Washington
2 posted 2000-02-02 12:09 PM


Amen brother! I can relate to this poem all too well.... I like this poem greatly! Keep up the good work and I'll be back for more!
Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
3 posted 2000-02-02 03:28 PM


How true.  I have been in that same situation more then once! Good job.
hoppy
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271

4 posted 2000-02-02 03:50 PM


excellent work!  

 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity."

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Don't think... you might learn.
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