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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
Words can't explress the way I feel I'm lost in my mind Withought a map or destination New to me like grass on tree's I'm not saying how it's gonna be I don't know anything I'm lost in me Stuck on she Can't find a way or how to be.. I'm talkin about a girl That don't feel the same about me... |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I can totally relate to this poem with a guy I like. Keep up the good work, putting you're feelings into words, and I'll keep reading you're poetry. "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Amen brother! I can relate to this poem all too well.... I like this poem greatly! Keep up the good work and I'll be back for more! |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
How true. I have been in that same situation more then once! Good job. |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
excellent work! "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. http://members.xoom.com/weeklyhoppy Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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