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Do You remember?
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Minnie Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 14 |
Do you remember when we met? Do you remember what you said? Do you remember the magic in the air? Do you remember our first date? Do you remember our first fight? Do you remember our first kiss? Do you remember when you made me laugh? Do you remember when you made me cry? Do you remember when we fell in love? Do you remember when we lied? Do you remember telling the painful truth? Do you remember falling out of love? Do you remember the first time we said "I Love You"? Do you remember when we said "I hate you"? Do you remember the promises we had? Do you remember breaking them? Do you remember when you chose her over me? Do you remember when I chose him over you? Do you remember when you broke my heart? Do you remember we said it was over forever? Do you remember when I took you back? Do you remember the time we did? Do you remember all the times we didn't? Do you remember when I would call you crying? Do you remember all the secrets we shared? Do you remember when you "proposed"? Do you remember when I said yes? Do you remember all the good times we shared? Do you remember the trouble we got in? Do you know that I have always loved you? Will you remember that no matter what? I know there is a future for us always. I know I will never stop loving you. I hope you never forget this. You are my past, my now and my forever. James I love you. |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Minnie, While there is no apparent rhyme scheme, the poem speaks for itself. I completely identify with this poem. I really like it. Good work. "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Wow... that’s a lot to remember... but it did speak it's purpose. Great job! |
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