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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-02-01 11:43 AM

Tamma's poem "~~Revenge~~" inspired me to write a little something for her. I'm sorry to hear what happened to you Tamma, but I know you can get through this.

I know your hurt
And I'm hurt too
I know your pain
I feel it too
I can't say I've been there
But it happened to me
The minute it happened to you
Afraid of the night
And what it might bring
I feel your thoughts working
Trying to get rid of the darkness
I see your eyes darting
From one shadow to the next
Wondering what is hiding in them

I fight a battle with you
Together we will stand
Until this monster within you
Deals the final hand
Together we will fight him
And together we will win
You and I together
Can find the courage within.

Good luck Tamma..I hope this helps

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).]

chic
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

1 posted 2000-02-01 12:02 PM

loved it sis and ur a very caring person to have wrote this for her. CONGRATS ON ALL

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

2 posted 2000-02-01 12:15 PM

thanks sis..i hope tamma appreciates it as much as you do

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

3 posted 2000-02-01 01:08 PM

scg: this is both a wonderful poem and a beautiful act of kindness... this is what i come to passions to find, people helping other people... i'm sure that tamma will appreciate what you've said here, and though i didn't write this poem, i would like to second the sentiment... i'm willing to stand and to help also...

as for the poem itself, i see only one minor flaw... you might change the next to last line from "together me and you" to "you and i together"... just a suggestion...

again, a very good job... and i just want to say again that we're all here for you tamma

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

4 posted 2000-02-01 02:32 PM

i just hope Tamma has a chance to see it before it goes off the screen!

~~Lavada

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2000-02-01 05:00 PM

thank you SCG

this was really sweet, it makes things alot easier when i know i have people that care, or that i know i can talk to

~~~Tamma~~~

*how was i to kno that today id meet someone like you? how was i to see the light with him in my path and you too far to touch?*

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