Teen Poetry #2 |
Love, A Memory |
Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Love, A Memory I remember love very well I remember the love that I felt You were very close to me then A memory in my heart is kept A memory from a dreamy heaven I remember you talking to me with your brown eyes smiling and conceded to unspoken plea as you moved into closer filing I whispered a hushed tone in your ear You allowed me a hesitant approach aside you had brushed a strand of hair " tell me, and fear not a reproach" How had they been in wit abound ? those words I said to win your laugh my heart a dance to twirl around at music in the trumpet’s draft Ever so more I was mighty pleased in joy I bathed and in glee I basked as a touch of silken skin appeased the prayer which my god I asked * "Silence there in the third row" A voice interrupted our rejoicing "I told you to keep your voices low" The teacher kept on harassing But I remember love very well Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
lol, those teachers, eh? This is beautiful, well written work. Your talent shines through in this, please keep it up! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Beautiful poem....very nice tone and words. Keep up the great work! Salma |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
I really liked this! Very beautiful..keep it up!! ~Sarah |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Cool poem, the ending wasnt expected. I like that Keep up the good work. I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
Do U still remember |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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