|Teen Poetry #2|
|Love, A Memory|
since 2000-01-29Posts 38
Love, A Memory
I remember love very well
I remember the love that I felt
You were very close to me then
A memory in my heart is kept
A memory from a dreamy heaven
I remember you talking to me
with your brown eyes smiling
and conceded to unspoken plea
as you moved into closer filing
I whispered a hushed tone in your ear
You allowed me a hesitant approach
aside you had brushed a strand of hair
" tell me, and fear not a reproach"
How had they been in wit abound ?
those words I said to win your laugh
my heart a dance to twirl around
at music in the trumpet’s draft
Ever so more I was mighty pleased
in joy I bathed and in glee I basked
as a touch of silken skin appeased
the prayer which my god I asked
"Silence there in the third row"
A voice interrupted our rejoicing
"I told you to keep your voices low"
The teacher kept on harassing
But I remember love very well
Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com
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since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
lol, those teachers, eh? This is beautiful, well written work. Your talent shines through in this, please keep it up!
~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha
since 2000-01-28Posts 781
Beautiful poem....very nice tone and words. Keep up the great work!
since 1999-12-02Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
I really liked this! Very beautiful..keep it up!!
since 2000-01-10Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
Cool poem, the ending wasnt expected. I like that Keep up the good work.
I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion
since 2003-11-07Posts 20
Do U still remember
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
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