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Moving on |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This poem is kinds long and i apologize. I would like comments though and any suggestions you may have. Thanks. Moving On Cool breeze blows Autumn leaves fall Her hair blows around her Sun coming up over the trees Highlighting her silhoette Never wanting to leave Afraid of whats ahead Feel as if the walls are closing in Mentality leaving her Never wanting to let go Got to move on Kiss goodbye the past Welcome the future Throw away the memories The best thing of her future May be left behind A broken heart is close at hand Wanting, a yearning for him Can't turn away Has to find a way to survive Without his smile A touch so warm A voice so comforting Has to continue living Got to move on Kiss goodbye the past Welcome the future Throw away the memories Keep on going Don't look back Gonna make it through Made it many times before Once more isn't any different Let herself be free Soread her wings and fly Aiming high for the burning sun Keep moving way up high It's a long way to go |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
great poem i can relate... Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable... -------823------- |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Thanks alot..and i appreciate you reading through it. Isa  |
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Penelope Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
I really like this poem.  Can't wait to read more of your writing. -Penny My advice in life is; talk to yourself, you never know what you'll learn. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
isabelle: this is a lovely depiction of individual freedom and the times of change and choice that we all go through... keep up the excellent work and i hope to hear more from you soon... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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