| Teen Poetry #2 |
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Please Be Here Forever |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
PLEASE BE HERE FOREVER I never thought this could be, that between you and me, there'd be something so strong. I could go the rest of my life, with all your pain and strife, and still do you no wrong. I want to be there for you, when you're down and you're blue, I wanna make you feel better. I want you to be here with me, because you've set my spirit free, please be here forever... ~Kristi Lynn for Todd from Oconto "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Wow, thats wonderful, I wish someone would have such feelings for me Todd is very lucky to have someone like you.I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I wish Todd would see how I feel, 'cuz I've never fallen for someone as hard as I fell for him. I'm more afraid that he'll just play me like most men do. Thanks for you're support, it means a lot. ~Kristi Lynn "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
you know what my mom would say? You never know unless you try..but with love..it's different. IF you try, you have the possibility of getting hurt..who wants to get hurt? I wish you luck with todd..and give yourself a pat on the back for this poem ![]() ~~Lavada "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I accidently replied three times, so I'm editing my messages..in tis one, I'll say again..Good Luck with todd! I hope he sees what a wonderful poet you are someday! [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Again, I say good luck, and wonderful Poem...I'm gonna go reply to some more of your poems now ![]() [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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