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Open Poetry #3

Wanting too much?

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-20 11:11 PM

WANTING TOO MUCH?

I dreamt of him on hot summer nights.
His tender heart and caring mind.
All the aspects of his body I loved.
The way he always let me know that
he would be there.

I yearned for his touch on chilled fall afternoons.
His soft hands and warm heart.
Every finger placed on my shivering body.
The way a single touch comforted me
like a blanket of security.

I craved his love on warm spring mornings.
His body laying next to mine.
All intertwined in passionate desires.
The way lovers lay in the bed together
beneath silken sheets.

I needed his embrace on cold winter days.
His arms to hold me, and warm me.
Every word spoken helped me burn.
The way one simple gaze could keep
me burning hot with desire.

I dreamt, yearned, craved, and needed him too much!

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-10-21 12:11 PM

Very very lovely - italics suits it.

wannabe_poet
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-10-21 12:32 PM

Nicely put!!

Cheers,

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-21 02:11 AM

Liked this much! Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-21 07:25 PM

Very passionate! Lovely piece, Lynn!

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Denise

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