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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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I am angel - shining blue I am love in purest hue... I am here to see this through Now we're one - instead of 2... I will hold you close to me In my presence, demons flee... Peaceful now, you'll always be Set your pain & sorrow free. Trust in me with all your might Destiny is just in sight... Together now, our future bright Let me hold you through the night. Close those eyes in soundest sleep I know our Lord - our souls will keep... Your wounds are healed, that were so deep I touch your eyes....no longer weep. ** To my Michael... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful!! Lucky man Micheal! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
That was beautiful *sigh* |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful! Very lovely read pFF....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yes, a true love wishes, oh and if only, love could take all the pain away, beautiful poem  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely and sweet! He's very lucky to have you as you are to have him! Seems like a great match...so when are you guys going to meet!?  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Poet DeVine....we're thinking about the first week in December...meeting in Dallas....::::wringing hands nervously!:::::: LOL Imagine what kind of stuff I'll be writing a week prior to that !! hehehe I probably won't even be able to type at that time, from my hands shaking so bad !! ROFLMAO ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
PFF....absolutely beautiful. I can understand the nervousness.....2 weeks for me. |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Beautiful, and sweet, Just like a dozen red roses. Michael is truely a lucky man!!!! |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
Not sure if you believe in reincarnation, but have you ever considered, by chance that you may be Shakspear, it's been a long time since I have found a ryming poem that didn't seem to have at least one foreced line. Bravoo... ------------------ ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Femme, You are the soothing of my soul. Your words are my comfort. I know I will sleep sound in your arms at night...as I haven't been able to here lately. Your wours always seem to know just where to touch me...I thank you and I love you for this. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
PFF, Absolutley Beautiful!! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
G- The true depths of your talent are finally coming to the fore. I must say that over the past week you have begun to impress me more and more! Do continue please!!! (notice no smart alec remark...that's how much I liked this!) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
so lovely love is in your words |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is truly captivating, pFF! What a beautiful work! Same goes for you as what you replied to me... Thank you  Very well done, it all "flows" so perfectly.------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful! Wonderful! (Why does everyone get to meet their loves so much earlier than me!!! WHINE WHINE! - seriously though, I'm really happy for you guys) |
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dave appleby New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 5manchester, england |
no longer weep better than rosetti |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you to everyone....when I wrote this, I didn't realize at the time, just how deep the meaning was...Michael knows that almost every line has a message in it that he and I alone know...I'm glad it means so much to you, Michael. Step into the light with me...where we may find our peace.... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, PFF |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
PFF: I echo all the above... a wonderful read... I bow to you and yours with thanks for sharing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pff, The treasures of beginnings always remains. Wonderful poem. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Absolutely beautiful ! I hope you'll be as thrilled, happy, in love and loved as I was (and still am) since September. : ) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very beautiful Gennifer Jennifer |
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