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Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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California

0 posted 1999-10-19 05:49 PM

Grandeur afloat in all you do, my angel of the silver wing.
Evening sings with dreams of you by gloried shores of beauty rare.
Ne'er been touched like this I know, kissing beneath the midnight sun.
No one before seemed to know how missing emotion was within.
In your eyes I have seen so much through hopes, through dreams of you and I.
Fly on these broken wings will I, to share your soul, give you my half.
Epigraph of our book of love, "Two restless hearts have found their peace."
Release I do my life to you, true to you always, Gennifer.

Michael Anderson

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Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

EAP

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-19-1999).]

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-19 06:11 PM

Micheal....that is simply beautiful! Gennifer is a very lucky person to have you.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20

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Houston

2 posted 1999-10-19 06:19 PM

This is beautiful Michael.. I am sure Gen will love it.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-10-19 06:25 PM

Oh Michael, this is so very beautiful, Gennifer is indeed lucky to have you. Well written

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

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4 posted 1999-10-19 06:50 PM

Absolutely Beautiful.Lucky Lady you have!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Craig
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since 1999-06-10

Posts 444

5 posted 1999-10-19 07:02 PM

Well done, this form of poetry is hard enough to do without the added difficulty of the internal message.

Superb.

Liked the Poe quote too and I am more than glad that this poem didn’t creep through my fingers to the deep.

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30

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Aloha, Oregon

6 posted 1999-10-19 07:16 PM

She's gonna love it Michael!!

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Christopher

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since 1999-08-02

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Purgatorial Incarceration

7 posted 1999-10-19 07:44 PM

Who's flexing who's poetic muscles??? Hmmm?

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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8 posted 1999-10-19 08:19 PM

Extremely clever and well done, Michael

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

9 posted 1999-10-19 10:20 PM

Gosh! You just keep getting better! What an innoative way to express your love. This must have took a bit of time. Know what?? You're both lucky to have eachother. It's so sweet!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 1999-10-19 10:26 PM

Wow, if this doesn't make her swoon.....nothing will. Lovely!!

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

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Arkansas

11 posted 1999-10-19 11:29 PM

** Swoon, swoon swoon! ** (grin) WOW ! Talk about knowing how to impress a woman ! There is no wonder I fell head over heels for you....with talent and the will to write like that, you have certainly stolen this girl's heart...I love you....thanks for all the blood, sweat and tears that went into this exquisite piece! You make me proud, to call you mine.....***** kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

Denise

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12 posted 1999-10-19 11:37 PM

ummmm...Michael, HOW IN THE HECK DID YOU EVER DO THIS? Are you like some kind of genius or something?!!!!!!

EXCELLENT!!!!!! (...oooops, sorry for shouting) BUT THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

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Denise

DreamEvil
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13 posted 1999-10-20 12:48 PM

poetFemmeFatale
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14 posted 1999-10-20 10:02 PM

This deserves to be on page # 1 !! (I'm not partial, ya know!) LOL So here goes........(kick) - - - -

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

15 posted 1999-10-20 10:50 PM

Michael this was fabulous! Lot of work here, and touching.
Femme I think you're partial (LOL), but I agree with ya. It belongs on top!

Alwye

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In the space between moments

16 posted 1999-10-21 08:30 PM

Wow, awesome...this is gorgeous, and deserves to be at the top!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

17 posted 1999-10-22 05:58 PM

Truly an awesome piece of work here Michael.
Gennifer is blessed to have you,(as I'm sure she knows) As always great job.

Jenny

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-22-1999).]

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