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wannabe_poet
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-10-20 02:02 AM


Today, I asked the Lord...

"Lord give me strength"
Today I did not shed a tear.

Today, I asked the Lord...

"Lord ease my pain"
Today I felt I had alot to gain.

Today, I asked the Lord...

"Lord help me get through this day"
Today I made a new friend

Today, I asked the Lord...

"Lord what should I do?"
Today, I DIDN'T CALL YOU!!!

Today has come and gone and yes I did survive...
Today I thank the Lord for being
alive...

[This message has been edited by wannabe_poet (edited 10-20-1999).]

[This message has been edited by wannabe_poet (edited 10-20-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 wannabe_poet - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
1 posted 1999-10-20 07:36 AM


Ask and ye shall receive.
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-20 09:47 AM


Nicely done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-10-20 09:58 AM


A very lovely piece.
Enjoyed the read wannabe....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

wannabe_poet
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 1999-10-20 01:29 PM


Thanks guys!!!
I wasn't sure what kind of response I would get from this if any... LOL



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A.Z.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-20 04:29 PM


Nicely spoken
wannabe_poet
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36
Markham, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 1999-10-20 06:07 PM


Thank you too hoot_owl_rn!!

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A.Z.

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