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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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Illinois

0 posted 1999-10-19 03:52 PM

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The screams I heard on Halloween
Made me a nervous wreck.
The shreiks came out so eerily
The hair stood on my neck.

For two years straight I've heard that sound
That stood my hair on end.
And, when I walked home late tonight
I heard it once again.

Real scared, I stopped and looked around
There's nothing I could see.
A cold chill then ran up my spine
There's something touching me.

I froze there for a moment, then
I quickly spun around.
My knees were shaking terribly
My voice would make no sound.

I felt a cold and clammy hand
Brush up against my face.
But when I looked into the eyes
There was a vacant space.

Two gaping holes where eyes once were
My blood froze in my veins.
That's when I got a real good look
At what's called Long John's brains.

There was this green slime oozing out
And dripping through his eyes.
Those eerie shreiks I heard that night
Were Long John's pitiful cries.

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Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 1999-10-19 03:58 PM

Nice job there Dove....but yanno, he does have terrible sinus problems also....that may not have been slime?.....But he is scarey..that's a sure thing!

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-19 04:27 PM

LOL.....too cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-19 04:32 PM

LOL, I'll be sure not to walk outside at night alone anymore.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-10-19 05:35 PM

LOVE it! You did a good job on both the graphics and the poem!!!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-10-19 05:36 PM

Thanks all for your replies!

Toe, it didn't start out that way, just how it seemed to end. Poor guy that LJ!! LOL
I thought about adding something like that in, but just couldn't make it fit. LOL

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

6 posted 1999-10-19 05:40 PM

Thank you very much PdV that means a lot! You snuck in here on me! I thought I was gonna scream at what I went through to get these graphics in here I tell ya! Oh no, that was LJ, I forgot! LOL...

Toe, Watcher, S.D I thank you all!

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

7 posted 1999-10-19 05:56 PM

LOL I loved it Wthdove, ALL of it ! : )

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 1999-10-19 06:19 PM

This is terrific WhtDove, enjoyed the read

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 1999-10-19 06:51 PM

Wonderfully done WhtDove. Your talent always amazes me.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 1999-10-19 08:58 PM

Gee, LongJohn, even the doves call ya green slime. I've always considered you a wonderful person myself. Scary, sure, but with style.

Good poem, Dove...and a brilliant expose.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

11 posted 1999-10-19 09:00 PM

Thanks so much Munda.

D.A. thanks girl! Glad you enjoyed it!

Marilyn, that's quite the compliment! Thank you very much!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

12 posted 1999-10-19 09:01 PM

Balladeer you snuck in on me too!
Thanks, for that means a lot coming from you buddy!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

13 posted 1999-10-19 09:40 PM

Great! I wasn't expecting to end like that!

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Denise

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

14 posted 1999-10-19 10:09 PM

I see after all the trouble you had, you finally got it to work. Well worth the trouble I think! Great poem! I love it LoL...though are you sure it wasn't me J/K

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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

15 posted 1999-10-20 07:08 AM

Denise thank you! I thought I'd give a shot at something I don't normally do. Glad you enjoyed it.

Echo, thank you for your sweet compliment. I'm sure it wasn't you Hon! LOL

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

16 posted 1999-10-20 07:15 AM

Poor LJA...but thanks for the laughter..

HUGS

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

17 posted 1999-10-20 04:41 PM

Whtdove....finally glad to see this thing come together for you. Nice job.....good for a laugh, or two

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

18 posted 1999-10-20 06:07 PM

Loved the surprise ending...love anything that brings a smile and graphics were great too.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

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Purgatorial Incarceration

19 posted 1999-10-20 06:30 PM

ROFL!!
Good one Dove!
It flowed easily, and even had a twist on the end!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

20 posted 1999-10-20 06:39 PM

Great time for goolies and things that go bump in the night. I enjoyed this alot.

Soleil
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since 1999-06-12

Posts 113

21 posted 1999-10-20 08:13 PM

Boo to you, too.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

22 posted 1999-10-20 10:41 PM

Rainbow I agree, poor LJA. I was gonna use Toe but I just couldn't! LOL...naw, really it just ended up that way, I was gonna do a serious one.

Thanks Hoot, appreciate it always!

Thanks for the compliment WildChild, I had a rough time getting them to work. Glad you liked them!

Christopher thanks much! That is different for me! Glad you got a kick out of it.

Martie, yes it is that time of year. I hope to see some others write some Halloween ones.
Thanks for the reply.

Soleil...guess I should explain why I am going to say Eek. Everytime someone says Boo, I always just answered Eek, just incase you all didn't understand. Thanks!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

23 posted 1999-10-31 01:16 PM

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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

24 posted 1999-10-31 08:25 PM

LOL....loved the effects too!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

25 posted 1999-10-31 09:06 PM

Thanks Robert I appreciate it.

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