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Lucie
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0 posted 1999-09-29 03:20 PM


Balladeer had been married to his wife for forty years.
When first married he had put a secret box beneath the bed.
"In order for our marriage to be built on trust and love.
You must promise never to look inside this box" he said.

In all the 40 years of their marital bliss and love.
Mrs. Deer had never touched it or peeked inside the lid.
Until the evening of their fortieth wedded year,
curiosity got her, and she just had to see what hid.

She looked inside the shoe box that was hid beneath the bed.
She found $870 dollars and three empty cans of beer.
That night as they got ready for the party with their friends
she turned to him and said "I have a question for you ‘Deer"

I must admit that after all our years of wedded bliss
I have to know why you have those things in the box beneath the bed.
I peeked, but I don’t understand the cans inside the box,
the one that you’ve been hiding since the day that we were wed.

At first Balladeer got flustered and blushed with disbelief
then calmly said to her "an explanation you deserve"
in the years we’ve been married every time I was unfaithful
I put a beer can in the box…She was stunned by what she heard.

She listened to the story and confession that he made
At first this news was shocking and it made Mrs. Deer so sad.
They had been married 40 years and happy most of them
so after just a bit of thought she guessed 3 times wasn’t bad.

A little while later curiosity was raised again,
thought about the money in the box and had to ask again.
‘Deer I understand the beer cans, but what’s the money for
well said ‘Deer "when the box got full I had to cash them in."

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-09-29 03:24 PM


ROFLMAO.... all those sheep escapades ended up giving him a tidy nest egg! LOL I hope his wife ewesd that money wisely! *G*
Michael
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2 posted 1999-09-29 03:28 PM


LOL,
Too funny. But was that including the sheep?

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Justbleu
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3 posted 1999-09-29 03:31 PM


That is great Lucie!! Very funny!! I have a question though!! I do not know if I know about the sheep?? I've heard about them on here often!!

LOL!!

Justbleu

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LJA'sLorelei54
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4 posted 1999-09-29 03:38 PM


Bad girl Lucie! but good story...glad there is not a box under my bed!
Sunshine
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5 posted 1999-09-29 03:40 PM


Great twist on a good joke! You go, girl!
Toerag
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6 posted 1999-09-29 03:50 PM


Balladeer's Prayer;

Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the Lord my sheep to keep,
If I should die before I wake,
I pray to God my sheep don't make,
Love with LongJohn or Andrew Scott,
Nor Dreamevil, cuz who knows what,
Will happen with those innocent lambs,
Cuz those guys are one night stands,
I've strived for years for virgin wool,
And those guys only will,
Get their jollies one by one,
Looking only for some wooly fun,
So listen Lord to my prayers
Keep Andrew and that weird sailor,
From my herd I beg you please,
They may pass on some strange disease.

suthern
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7 posted 1999-09-29 04:09 PM


ROFL @ Balladeer's Prayer!!! And here I thought DE was the preacher man! LOL. Well done, Toe!
Balladeer
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8 posted 1999-09-29 05:19 PM


Hey, Lucie! You're giving away all my secrets. I bought a new car with the aluminum recycling cash that she didn't know nothing about.

No, Toe, this is my prayer:

Lord, before to sleep I go
Don't ever let me be a Toe.
Please don't make my hair fall out
Or make my gut look like the gout.
Lord, no blackheads on my face
Or ears that leave me in disgrace.
Please don't take away from me
Ability to write poetry.
Please don't attach a barnacle
Like he has with his Suthern belle.
Please don't disgrace me with his bod
That makes Quasimoto look like God.
When I have needs to plant my root
Don't make it in a piece of fruit.
That's all I ask. Please make it so
Dear Lord, don't let me be a Toe.

WhtDove
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9 posted 1999-09-29 06:31 PM


I've heard this one before. But a like a Toerag job, you Lucie'd it up! LOL great going!
Lucie
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10 posted 1999-09-29 08:07 PM


yes Balladeer, but you wouldn't lend me the keys so I had to tell hehe
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 1999-09-29 08:27 PM


LOL
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12 posted 1999-09-29 08:33 PM


You all are simply UNBELIEVABLY HILLARIOUS!!


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Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 1999-09-29 08:52 PM


Lucie,
The way I heard the story was when her husband asked her what she would like for a present she would always say a gold boyscout knife. When she had quite a few he asked her why all the gold boyscout knives? She said it was for her old age. And he said I don't understand? And she said do you know what a boyscout would do for a gold boyscout knife?

Lucie
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14 posted 1999-09-29 11:49 PM


Ha Ha Seymour.. thats putting a twist on the opposite end of it huh? haha
Saxoness
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15 posted 1999-09-30 01:36 AM


I think I need an ambulance.......lack of oxygen due to laughing..........call 911!

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Pufalove
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16 posted 1999-09-30 01:47 AM


Cute Luc.......you are all a trip....better than "The Young and Restless"!
Dragoness
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17 posted 1999-09-30 07:33 AM


Loved the ending!!! LOL

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RainbowGirl
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18 posted 1999-09-30 08:03 AM


Lucie: ROFL...There must be more ewes out there than anyone thought..*g*

HUGS

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Nurse Crachet
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19 posted 1999-10-02 06:01 PM


If I keep reading all these I'm gonna have to commit myself, I think I'm losing my grip on reality. Please keep me rolling, I've never felt better.
Lucie
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20 posted 1999-10-02 11:23 PM



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