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Sunday Softening
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Sunday Softening |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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The sun patterns the wall to lace and weaves crystal into the morning we lie heaped under blankets listening to the lazy minutes marveling each other |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Sounds like the perfect Sunday, or any day to me! You painted a wonderful picture with so few words! Love it!  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, so few words, but so much said. I loved the feel to this one, one of those lazy afternoons when nothing needs to be done and you spend the day just enjoying each other. Great Poem!! ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
I loved this one...you caught the moment so wonderfully... I could'nt have expressed it any other way... loved it! mia |
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