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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-08-16 09:51 PM


Tiny tendrils of a silver mist swirl and flow,
Sunlight streams and jungles of flowers grow.
Delicate sprites dance on the breeze,
And treasures of gold rest on translucent leaves.

Ribbons of rainfall cascade in the glen,
Unicorns prance and play just around the bend.
Mountains of clouds tumble all around,
And butterflies flit and flutter, heaven bound.

Elfin folk reminisce of time passed long ago,
While wizards and mages reveal the magic they know.
Castles of crystals stand upon hills of green,
And great warriors tell of all they have seen.

Princesses wander, beautiful pearls of grace,
While shining princes persue them, in thrill of the chase.
Dragons of wisdom silently stand,
And are the guardians over this sacred land.

A world of mystery, a land so great,
Filled with kindness, devoid of hate.
A place of love, of treasures unseen,
This is my world, my land of dreams.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 08-16-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-17 03:44 PM


Krista this is absolutely beautiful! What a gem I have discovered aaaaaallllllll the way in the back of the book!!!! It is my pleasure to bump this UP!

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Denise

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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-10-17 04:12 PM


How beautiful. It saddens me that no such place exists, except in our imaginations and our writings.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 1999-10-17 06:07 PM


Beautiful indeed!
And Sys...that's all we need!

Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-10-17 06:15 PM


Beautiful, alwye, a land we all need to retreat to from time to time.
Alwye
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In the space between moments
5 posted 1999-10-17 08:46 PM


Yeah, definitely a land we need to visit from time to time...this one was written a while ago, but still suits my feelings well..thank you all very much.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-10-17 08:55 PM


Beautiful imagery Alwye
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