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The Game (Poet deVine's pantoum challenge, maybe Im posting a bit early but oh well) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
The Game Submission was the game And oh, that game is fun Belittled by the shame And in the end, I won And oh, that game is fun Revenge is very sweet And in the end, I won Now I have fresh meat Revenge is very sweet Bitter as lost innocence Now I have fresh meat I'm laughing at your decadence Bitter as lost innocence Belittled by the shame I'm laughing at your decadence Submission was the game ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Great work here Sys..... Really enjoyed this piece..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very good...challenge well met. Jenny  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Excellent! You did very well with this challenge. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Bravo child. I must say your really happy about facing your fear arent you ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Extremely well done, Sys. Challenge well met. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I once again am impressed by all you talented folks who do these various forms and do them so well! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
well written for a piece so hard to write |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well done indeed my friend. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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