Open Poetry #3 |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Once I was scared A coward in a tin shell I've come out of that cocoon Now I have the strength To smile, and say, "I don't need you anymore." I'm getting high again.... High on hope I know better I know I'll come down.... But I just don't care anymore For tonight, just this moment, I can smile I can wish I can do anything And nothing can hurt me Never again will you control me I'm free as a dove Everything's beautiful tonight The diamond stars on black velvet, Flowers wilted with time, The patterned cracks in the sink, Even I am beautiful tonight. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My friend, you are every night. ![]() ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!! I can see the beauty inside of you in this piece.I know it must shine thought to the outside! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bravo! ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow, this is beautiful! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thaks everyone, for the replies. I usually dont write poems so happy and peaceful...but it reflects the mood I was in last night. ![]() ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The diamond stars on black velvet! Awesome Sys! JennyLee ![]() |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
AMY YOUR ALWAYS BEUTIFUL ![]() ![]() ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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