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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-11 10:06 PM


Poetic Endeavors

On this planet
somewhere in between
genders
sits a lone flag
planted
by some wayward explorer
for nothing more than
the craving
that commissioned
this investigation
into the unfamiliar
to seek new understandings
answers old questions
and perhaps
just do something a little contrary


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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1 posted 1999-10-12 06:49 AM


Nicely done.

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart



Sunshine
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2 posted 1999-10-12 10:58 AM


Let the lone flag continue waving us on.

Thank you for an interesting read, Robert B!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 1999-10-12 09:33 PM


Your pieces are always interesting. I liked this very much!
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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4 posted 1999-10-16 04:43 PM


Very cute, RobertB - Now let's see if you can do a pantoum...
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL
5 posted 1999-10-16 05:13 PM


gulp....OK..I guess I'll try.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise
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6 posted 1999-10-16 06:17 PM


Go ahead, give it a try! I'm sure you can!
Oh, great poem, by the way!

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Denise

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