Open Poetry #3 |
Passion's Soldier |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
As I write, Feel the power of my tone, Like threatening thunder making battle march. Distance breaks with each footfall, As wind of thought, Readies a lightning rod, Of punishing demeanor. Every word escapes from fingers, Every word tasted first by my own lips. The morsels and drops devoured after. To complete the feast of feeling and enraptured passions. Though full of speech. These battle lines are cleary marked, On page after page of sing songed And dreary thoughts. Until the enemy force of depression ceases. Retreating quietly back to the Darkness Of the hills and valleys of Anger's kingdom. Go forth and collect the footsteps left there, And dare to follow in the mighty path Of the battlefields of Joy and peace. Be strong against the foe and rise To a level of knighthood in kingdom of Happiness. Prepare journeys for the world, In a steaming dish of thought and words. Then hold a great dinner in the hall of Love. Eat of the fruits of experiences. Drink of the wine of passion. Be merry in thoughts and lessons learned. Life is short, but full of intrigue. Revel in it as you would in making love. Experience it to the fullest possibilitie. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well written - life IS so short I agree. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, I really like this one, thanks for posting |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely wonderful! I enjoyed reading this! ------------------ Denise |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is how I've been spending my nights, reading your eariler work. It's something that I enjoy doing. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Thankyou J |
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