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The chosen one
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The chosen one |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The chosen one She is no angel in disguise. Fly's but not with gossamer rise. She paints no portraits of pretense And haunts no twilight of suspense. Ghosts no themes of moonlight schemes Does not ride the vague of dreams. Nor does she promise endless joy. Or toy with me in playful ploy. She's there as solid as can be, With all her glad and misery. And I need her more and more, As the years slide by, each score. Her presence turns a key within. With a wave, a smile, a simple grin. She walks me, the abyss of fear. And holds my hand and dries my tear. She's the better half of my story And I give her all the glory. The essence of the mornings dawn. I think, the reason I was born. I cannot know the Lords plan but He chose me, as the lucky man. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A real heart melter! How very sweet!  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore....your better half maybe, But I can tell you one thing , I'll bet she's sure smiling after this one |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very,very sweet Sy....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done Sy.... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed... |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very touching!. Lucky Lady, Lucky You. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice, Seymour... show this one to her! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geez, another Hallmark sale! Well done, Sy! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Seymour, This is golden. Definately one of your best, in my eyes. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely! Very lucky Lady you have! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
So many well wishers, I can only offer my heart felt thanks for your read and nice comments and I'll put in a good word for you all the next time I talk to God. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so beautiful, dear Sey. Well well WELL done! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I second all of the above, Seymour the Sailor Man (here's hoping you are enjoying your cruise  ! )------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, will ditto all of the above on this one, really really nice |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Isn't this what we all long for? A partner who completes us! A gratifying life long relationship! Bravo, Seymour, Bravo! An inspiration! |
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Soleil Member
since 1999-06-12
Posts 113 |
Sounds like she is pretty special. So is the poem. |
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