Open Poetry #3 |
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loosing the grip of all |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
Lost in a place That is near, but far Lost in a time That days forget Lost in imagination That we must imagine Lost in a world That is seen, not touched Lost in the unreal That is a break from reality Lost in dreams That make us wonder Lost in sleep That gives us peace. ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
oh...I do like this one and it indeed likes me ![]() ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice... I enjoyed. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Very deep and well thought out... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
A very good read. Well done. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading....Very good poem! |
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wolfie97 Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58Newcastle, WY USA |
thank you all for taking the time to reply to this one! I hope I can get more on here for your enjoyment. "Ride, boldly ride" the shade replied, If you seek for Eldorodo. -EAP ------------------ Garrett 'sneaky' Gall |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good! I enjoyed this one! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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