Open Poetry #3 |
'Bout Them Tears..White Dove Wants Ta know. |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Tears are like rain, Droplets of pain, Either physical or mental, It's pain all the same. Tears rinse out the hurt, And cleanse one's mind, A loving hug, Dries tears in time. Raindrops of sadness, Dew from the heart, Some tears never dry, That's the saddest part. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How incredibly beautiful... and how very true! Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Very good I enjoyed. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WEll Toe, you've written something so very true! I loved it, it was beautiful! Thanks buddy! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Very good read! Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Darling: So true...Can I have a hug?.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
love this toe, this is beautiful |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
another beautiful here Toe..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Toe, I'm impressed....I do so like this serious side to ya |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hoot...so?..ya wanna fool around?...LOL...thanks guys and gals for the kind words....I do have a serious side, but I keep it in the fridge next to my beer most of the time..... [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 10-14-1999).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well at least your serious side is in the fridge and accessible once in a while, I kept mine in the deep freeze for many years. It is good to see this side of you, I must agree. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Toe, this is impressive! Your serious side is as beautiful as your funny side is hillarious! Your talent is well rounded! ------------------ Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toerag: I think the consensus is... we want more! *G* |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Toe, you should write more serious schtuff ... and more funnies as well ... in short, you should write more ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you mushy guy |
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