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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-10-14 11:03 AM


Tears are like rain,
Droplets of pain,
Either physical or mental,
It's pain all the same.

Tears rinse out the hurt,
And cleanse one's mind,
A loving hug,
Dries tears in time.

Raindrops of sadness,
Dew from the heart,
Some tears never dry,
That's the saddest part.

© Copyright 1999 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-10-14 11:06 AM


How incredibly beautiful... and how very true! Well done!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-10-14 11:07 AM


Toe,
Very good I enjoyed.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 1999-10-14 11:11 AM


WEll Toe, you've written something so very true! I loved it, it was beautiful! Thanks buddy!
Watcher666
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4 posted 1999-10-14 11:15 AM


Very good read! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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5 posted 1999-10-14 11:23 AM


Darling: So true...Can I have a hug?..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM
6 posted 1999-10-14 11:33 AM


love this toe, this is beautiful
Pepper
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7 posted 1999-10-14 11:43 AM


another beautiful here Toe.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-10-14 12:59 PM


Toe, I'm impressed....I do so like this serious side to ya
Toerag
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Ala bam a
9 posted 1999-10-14 02:35 PM


Hoot...so?..ya wanna fool around?...LOL...thanks guys and gals for the kind words....I do have a serious side, but I keep it in the fridge next to my beer most of the time.....

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 10-14-1999).]

Michael
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10 posted 1999-10-14 05:51 PM


Well at least your serious side is in the fridge and accessible once in a while, I kept mine in the deep freeze for many years. It is good to see this side of you, I must agree.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.




Denise
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11 posted 1999-10-14 07:42 PM


Toe, this is impressive! Your serious side is as beautiful as your funny side is hillarious! Your talent is well rounded!

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Denise

suthern
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12 posted 1999-10-15 09:39 AM


Toerag: I think the consensus is... we want more! *G*
JTF
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13 posted 1999-10-16 06:15 AM


Toe, you should write more serious schtuff ... and more funnies as well ... in short, you should write more ...
passing shadows
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14 posted 2004-05-04 03:22 AM


you mushy guy
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