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Tears of my soul
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Tears of my soul lit by your flame I knew a life with you as we gave our gifts to share would sparkle with love and fun knowing how much we cared but maybe we hurt each other deeply and maybe we should have understood that I would lose my way knowing life without you there would by contrast be so empty and bare Tears from my soul crying embers from our flame ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, but so sad... I hope those tears bring rainbows soon, dear friend. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
will echo suthern here too, hope that your tears wash away the pain and soon you will have your rainbow hugs  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Echos and dittos... that O&O is a thought thief! LOL. [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-14-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A heartfelt poem. Hugs R G ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whoa....this is wonderful. Great job Rainbow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
RainbowGirl, this is so touching and so well done! I enjoyed this one very much! ------------------ Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks all.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful and so very touching, Rainbow....wonderful job. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautifully written, but so sad RG. Hope you are happy and sharing those rainbows with us all again soon. If you want to talk to someone out of the picture email me again ... ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Alwye: Thanks sweetheart HUGS Isis: Thanks for the mail.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I share a tear ...  HUSG |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sad,but beautiful.Nicely done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...this is touching |
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