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So help me ( WhtDove challenge )
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So help me ( WhtDove challenge ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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So help me I savor every word with fits of aim. Each charming phrase so neither be to blame. For since I've learned her peripatetic space I smile and try to keep myself in her grace. Amphetamine desires blood, comb each classic tome. Analyze each move and look to see which way she roam. With rapt regard and steely look without a show of fear My answer is a simple and a pleasant, yes my dear. Now she comes from a different zone and a different tone Her kettle boils with olive oil and often sounds a crone. She is of positive drown and whatever her lot She hammers it down whether it be true or not. A force much equal to a hurricane. And to a hurricane there's little refrain. I've come to withstand the force with little or no fear And anchor my answers with a simple yes my dear. Of fears and tears there has been enough. We have learned to fly above that stuff. And tenderness is but a plus, For very simple folks like us. Our love is as strong as the gordian knot And for a common couple that is allot. Our roots are deep in the common sod. Two common peas in a common pod. And though we are of different ilk Our marriage is as strong as silk. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I have to say this was heartfelt. Not like the rest. Very well done! Thank you for the sincerety! I appreciate it! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
enjoyed this much Sy ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...that's what a marraige should be Seymore, thanks for the read  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watch, Thank you for the like. WhtDove, I tried to write a so help me. I think I came close. Pepper, I'm glad you enjoyed. Hoot, Thank you for the smile, it will last a while. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Seymour!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you for the well done. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Honest, tender and sweet! ------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-14-1999).] |
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