Open Poetry #3 |
The Quill’s Feather |
Sunshine
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The Quill’s Feather By my soul so very long ago she took me in her pink-white hands and bade me write, strand by strand. Dipping my tip in the blackest ink she put her thoughts on paper fine feelings that she shared were partly mine. She knew not my feelings when her liquid feelings flowed from my pen knowing I would write for her again, and again. She took time putting to black line her deepest passions left unheard except for these here, her written words. Penmanship extraordinaire writing with beauty, grace, flair keeping her loving words safely here. When feelings became warm she would clutch me tighter, then the feather at my top would quiver when She caught her own gasp at the lines of devotion she wrote down feelings of love she would within drown, drown. Those were the times best when quivering feather laid to rest for love’s passion had met passion’s test. 6 October, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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suthern
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Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done! |
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Sunshine
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Sorry I was so delinquent in thanking you Suthern, for reading this little piece. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
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Lovely,simply lovely! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Dragoness, for letting me know. |
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Nan
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This is lovely, Sunshine - a real pleasurable read... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely little poem. |
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Sunshine
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Nan, Sy, knowing that you've read this makes my Wednesday a Friday! Thank you so much for commenting... |
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Pepper Member Elite
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Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely indeed Sunshine....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sunshine
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Pepper, thanks for taking time to read... |
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