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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 1999-10-09 09:37 PM


My son, my child, my precious child
one look at you and my heart cries
what is it that makes you act so tough
gives you this feeling you’re not truly loved
is it because others want you to please
and abuse you for something of prestige
is it your looks and with that the tease
the coldness of people that makes your heart freeze
it worries me sometimes to see at your age
you expressing emotions with such a rage
I see your kindness, warmth and love
and sometimes send a prayer above
I will never fail to find a way
to bring some sunshine in each of your days
to find the words that will explain
it is not you causing this pain
you are perfect and I am proud you’re my son
I love you dearly,
with love,
your Mom

© Copyright 1999 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-09 09:42 PM


Wonderful sentiments to your son. Just keep lovin'em and he'll turn out fine!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-10-10 12:49 PM


Being a mother is the hardest job in the world, we can only do our best and hope it is enough...nicely spoken!
Munda
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3 posted 1999-10-10 07:27 PM


Thank you mothers. : )
Watcher666
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4 posted 1999-10-13 08:02 AM


As you were there when he crawled,be there for the falls,Support and love him.Then pray for the best. Lovely verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

U K Hero
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since 1999-08-08
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5 posted 1999-10-13 08:20 AM


you are perfect and I am proud you’re my son
I love you dearly,
with love,
your Mom

Says it all really, excellent.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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6 posted 1999-10-13 01:35 PM


Munda: Beautiful..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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7 posted 1999-10-13 01:42 PM



This really brought a tear to my eyes.
Parents raising kids today have a very difficult time of it. Just keep on Loving him.

Ohme

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 1999-10-14 07:01 PM


Watcher, UK, Rainbow, Ohme, Thank you.
What a wonderful family this is.

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