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Tears (answer to WhtDove's challenge)
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Tears (answer to WhtDove's challenge) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Each time my Lady is moved to tears, something inside of me dies. I cannot assuage all of her fears, 'tis the reason that she cries. I cradle my Lady close to me, letting her feel safe and warm. I hate seeing her in misery, so I calm her inner storm. My ears listen to her every word, while my heart feels all her pain. My Lady's woes will not go unheard, for my heart they split in twain. She cares not to hear of my anguish, as from her it all does stem. In her unconcern she does languish, being a treacherous femme. This shows the comfort I give to her, against the pain that life deals. Upon me the same she will not confer, for my sanity she steals. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent! Show a strength of spirit in you.A caring heart and soul.It's hard to be understanding when your misunderstood. Liked this one much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
very well done, and sadly so, yes a lot of times, not just for you, women are cradled when they cry, men just have to deal with it...double standard hits again |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Scott this was touching. You have a big heart, and I'm sorry if it's not returned to you. I believe strongly it should be a two way street. Though I guess I would have to agree with you here and say I'm pretty much in the same position, I comfort tho he don't cry. But only once I can remember was he consoling. So I know just where it is you're coming from. I try to look at the positives, but sometimes I just can't get around needing and understanding ear and heart. I thank you for answering the challenge. I have to say though it was not directed at you, I'm sorry you felt that way. IT is for my own insight, so as I may learn what it is you guys feel when a women cries. Cause I see lots of frustration, and not knowing what to do. On my end that is! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother, this is excellent, Very well done! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, always enjoy your work, well done. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Excellent piece....indeed it shows your big heart..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful response to the challange Scott, it shows your tender side you try well to hide sometimes. Nicely done my friend  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely piece here Dream. Very heartfelt. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Great job here Dream... great... |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Wow..can you write a poem both sweet and sad at the same time, or what??? This has a great deal inside....wonderful job, Dream. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you all much for your accolades on this piece. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow Dream, This slipped by me the first time through...but I'm kind of glad it did. Having learned more of you and your relationship of late makes me truly appreciate this piece much more than I probably culd have before. Excellent, my friend...you have my every compassion. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I understand your words so well, my friend. A beautiful piece this is. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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