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IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

0 posted 1999-10-23 11:53 AM

I
fall
freely
spilling
over
you
like
a
waterfall
of
emotion

tumbling down
I am drawn into the vortex
of your love
carried by the whirpool
of intensity
til together
we are mingled with the stars
and lifted by our love

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

1 posted 1999-10-23 12:23 PM

Oh, Isabelle, so beautiful.

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-10-23 12:27 PM

oooh, I like this one...very sensual imagery.
Good poem, izzy.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-23 12:45 PM

Lovely! Liked this much!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

4 posted 1999-10-23 01:52 PM

The imagery is beautiful. Like this a lot.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-10-23 09:40 PM

Beautiful..your work always conveys emotion in such wonderful, unique ways, Izzy..I love this.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-23 09:46 PM

Wow, what a visual! Great one, Izzy, really loved it!

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Denise

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 1999-10-24 10:38 AM

Yeah Izzy!!!!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 1999-10-24 11:49 AM

You go girl....this is great!

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

9 posted 1999-10-24 05:26 PM

Isabelle, this was orgasmic. Does anyone have some icewater??

Exquisite writing.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

10 posted 1999-10-24 07:00 PM

Sky.....that WAS my intent! *wink*
glad ya got what I was meaning

Izzzzzzzzy

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

11 posted 1999-10-24 07:03 PM

A cascade of praise? I loved this.

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

12 posted 1999-10-24 07:07 PM

Ahhhh Izzy....eloquent and sensual and...why didn't I write this??

Beautifully done!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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