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IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
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0 posted 1999-10-23 11:53 AM


I
fall
freely
spilling
over
you
like
a
waterfall
of
emotion

tumbling down
I am drawn into the vortex
of your love
carried by the whirpool
of intensity
til together
we are mingled with the stars
and lifted by our love

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II

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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
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1 posted 1999-10-23 12:23 PM


Oh, Isabelle, so beautiful.


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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
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Posts 7666
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2 posted 1999-10-23 12:27 PM


oooh, I like this one...very sensual imagery.
Good poem, izzy.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-23 12:45 PM


Lovely! Liked this much!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
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4 posted 1999-10-23 01:52 PM



The imagery is beautiful. Like this a lot.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
5 posted 1999-10-23 09:40 PM


Beautiful..your work always conveys emotion in such wonderful, unique ways, Izzy..I love this.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


Denise
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6 posted 1999-10-23 09:46 PM


Wow, what a visual! Great one, Izzy, really loved it!

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Denise

Nan
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7 posted 1999-10-24 10:38 AM


Yeah Izzy!!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-10-24 11:49 AM


You go girl....this is great!
Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
9 posted 1999-10-24 05:26 PM


Isabelle, this was orgasmic. Does anyone have some icewater??

Exquisite writing.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

IsabelleSkye
Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253

10 posted 1999-10-24 07:00 PM


Sky.....that WAS my intent! *wink*
glad ya got what I was meaning
Izzzzzzzzy

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
11 posted 1999-10-24 07:03 PM


A cascade of praise? I loved this.

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On the wings of day-bright dreams...


caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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12 posted 1999-10-24 07:07 PM


Ahhhh Izzy....eloquent and sensual and...why didn't I write this??

Beautifully done!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


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