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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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I’ve traveled down life’s rough road hitting all the bumps and dips. Have learned a lot of lessons that only life like this equips. I’ve often thought of writing down the trials of my life, but who would want to read a book that’s full of painful strife. Now I’m not trying to tell you that no good has ever come. I count two great successes in my daughter and my son. But many times I’ve often thought how happy I would be. If I could just have one smooth spot in all this misery. It seems as soon as I’ve stood up and brushed off my backside. Here comes another trial that once again hits me broadside. I guess the Lord is trying to strengthen me with miseries. When next you see me on the street just call me Hercules. ------------------ Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey Herc, Let them boulders down off your shoulders already...quit trying to carry the load alone. I know you know where to look for help. Cute poem though, Lucie. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lucie, this touched my heart. I can really relate to this piece...... Seeing these feelings in writng, somehow makes me feel a bit stronger..... Thank you. ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Help is always here dear friend and though in Darkness, my hand is ever outstretched. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Hey Lucie....if you need I'm here.Well done poem. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Is Hercules doing the drag queen thing these days? Pardon the humour, but this made me smile -- they say misery loves company, and my misery is thrilled that she is not alone! --Kesslynne ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, Lucie!!! You take your hard times and give a gift to us all! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...And that's the truth!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hercules? All this time I thought you were an Atlas!! Great stuff, Lucie. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughing, boy do I know that feeling  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I have got the Gawd-awfullest picture in my mind of you right now !! LOL A little bit of Hercules, and then some of that "aura" you carry in Adult !! hehe Wow, what a combo! I'm thinking I'm a bit scared of you now ! You are such the sweet little gal, and now I'm not sure HOW I see you ! LOL Oh well, I am here for you Herc.....have been missing ya....  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great poem. You didn't build that poetic muscle by sittin on you backside. You must be doing something right. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hey, Luce... ditto all the above... I liked the write... my best to you and yours. |
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