Windows Of The Soul (acrostic)

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Windows Of The Soul (acrostic)

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-10-14 03:21 AM

WINDOWS OF THE SOUL

When looking into your eyes,
I see the bluest of skies.

Needing to go deeper,
Deeper than any ocean,
Open door to your soul I find,
With windows of love so kind.
Seeing what is hidden or not exposed,
Opening the windows of your soul.

Finding there your deepest fears,
The deepest love and care,
Hearing it speak through the air,
Eternity dwells there,

Sweetness of despair,
Outwardly crying,
Unending loneliness of love dying,
Looking into the windows of your soul.

John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

1 posted 1999-10-14 03:26 AM

Very clever use of the acrostic form. I liked it.

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~GS~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 1999-10-14 03:39 AM

Thanks Gun!

Thanks for shareing YOUR poems!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-14 09:03 AM

Good one

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 1999-10-14 09:42 AM

Well done R H .....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 1999-10-14 10:09 PM

Thanks Hoot and pepper!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-14 10:14 PM

What a lovely poem and a great acrostic!

I simply love acrostics!

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Denise

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