How I Comfort (challenge from Whtdove)

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Open Poetry #3

How I Comfort (challenge from Whtdove)

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-10-14 12:42 PM

I see the worry in your eyes
frustration is your emotion.
For at this time we are apart
it’s difficult to show devotion.

The minutes tick by so quickly,
two hours is not long.
To share with you my troubles
and tell you what is wrong.

You tend to lead the topics
you want to hear of me.
Your need for my description
of all you can not see.

I try to ask about you
your answer is the same.
That you are doing all right
and your happy that I came.

Though I’ve not missed a visit
in going on two years.
I tell you that I love you,
but to lose me is your fear.

I know that there will come a time
when I can wrap you in my arms.
Can keep you there forever
safe from all life's harm.

There will come a time my love
when you’ll be home with me.
And I can comfort you with love
and not just poetry.

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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-14 12:48 PM

I understand.

Your verse is a comfort, though does not compare with holding the one you love.

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Nothing is worse than sorrow,
except perhaps disdain.
I'll be myself tomorrow,
tonight I'll feel the pain.

DreamEvil©

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 1999-10-14 12:50 PM

Very touching Lucie.....I hope he will be in your arms soon......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-14 01:04 PM

nicely done

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 1999-10-14 02:15 PM

Well done, Lucie! We give what we can when we can... and hope their hearts hear all the rest. *S*

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-10-14 11:06 PM

Ok, ok, it was a tear jerker. Very good expression! I enjoyed this read and it was heartfelt.

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