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Julisha66
New Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 5
Clarkrange, Tennessee USA

0 posted 1999-10-13 09:06 PM

Please give me your opinion on this, should I put this in my son's high school yearbook?

It seems like only yesterday that we were
blessed with our first born son.

As we look back in time through all the
memories and the photographs we have collected, we wonder, how could it happen
so fast?

Our little boy is growing up.

Graduation time is here and we are extremely
proud of your many accomplishments. For the
first time we realize our little boy has
grown up.

We love you and wish for you a very rewarding
life filled with love, happiness and success.
Enjoy your future!!!

Any suggestions anyone?

Richard 33
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

1 posted 1999-10-14 12:20 PM

Just one, it's fine just the way it is.

Once an empty nest, once a tear in a mother's
eye!!!

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 10-14-1999).]

Julisha66
New Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 5
Clarkrange, Tennessee USA

2 posted 1999-10-14 01:10 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read and give me your opinion.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-10-14 02:13 AM

Perfect the way it is!! If it was too long or too mushy it may embarrass him. Get to it, and send it to the school.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-14 08:51 AM

I like it, can't see him having any problem with it

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