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Challenge for all you men
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Challenge for all you men |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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ok, let's see if you can rise to the occasion here. Now only the TRUTH!!! Ok, men now tell the truth In your poem I want the proof. Tell me what it is you do When your lady cries to you! Do you tend to roll your eyes And wonder why again she crys? Do you listen and understand And comfort like a loving man? Can she sit and talk with you Bout how she feels, like good friends do? What is the comfort that you give If any at all in this life you live? Please be serious, from the heart In how you treat your other part. Not what you think we need to hear Just truth and from your heart my dear. Can you meet the challenge? [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-13-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I see you've left them speachless Whtdove  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I guess I have Hoot! What can I say!? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
YUP, it sure does looks like they are speechless...I am curious to know their replies (If there ever is any LoL) Good challenge! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove,wow looks like the cat's got their tongues hehehe,lookig forward to reading their replies Well Done Hon ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
HeHe, after I read this, I scrolled down and saw a reply, oh well Still a good challenge, now I must go read what was written in response to it ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Michael was brave enough to answer the challenge! |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
well I don't really have someone right now, but I will take a shot at it. Sweetheart your tears are falling, heaven is raining, what's wrong? come over here, and let me hold you close, I want you to hear the sound of a heart that beats only for you, I want you to feel a soul that lives only for you. Dear one that I am in love with, let me kiss the tears from your cheeks, let me give of my self in any way possible to dry those tears, and make your smile return, I love the more than my own breath of life, All my God given devotion is to the, you are the only, when you are hurting so am I. You are my life, my soul, my expression, and everything in between, you are my lady!!! [This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 10-14-1999).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Speechless? I think not dear Ladies, though I would ask you show us poor men the way and write the same challenge as it applies to yourself. Any takers or is it just easier to watch from the sidelines? ------------------ Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. DreamEvil© |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great idea WhtDove, they'll probably all be loving responses being from poets. I'll probably get jealous cos my man doesn't do that!! ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
It is posted, it is done, I popped it off in a click. And notice I am the only one, who did it as an acrostic! (neener-neener Michael!) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ok, we got em rolling now! Thanks guys! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Okay one and all, it was brought to my attention that women should also answer for what they do when men cry. I think it is fitting that if men are asked to do this challenge that women should also do it. SO PLEASE WOMEN, ONE AND ALL, TELL US WHAT YOU DO TO COMFORT AND CONSOLE YOUR MEN! Thanks, let's see if we can rise to the occasion also. |
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